There is a turtle named Urtle. There is a fish named Fred. They lived in shallows of the pacific ocean. The turtle is grumpy and the fish likes to tease. The fish and the turtle are friends against the odds. They liked to play hide and go seek with the local pyjama shark. And when the pyjama shark got hungry, Fred the fish would come out of his hiding place and say… “come and eat me come and eat me.” Then Fred would swim away to the safety of the shallow waters Urtle would have to race after Fred before the pajama shark got him. Every time this happened Urtle told Fred off. “Your going to get us in big trouble one day.” he said just as an orca came and ate the pyjama shark whole.” “Ohh now I'm going to have to tease you.” laughed Fred.
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